Chongo's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Macrocosm]

You yourself constantly admit that there are plot holes, so I won't point them out, aside from the obvious, if he just created the world, then what world was he living in?

And I can see why you nitpicked on animation. While the computer scenes were amazing, your cartoon animation was a bit rough. Maybe it was my computer though.

But dont think of this as a big nitpick of your work. It's a standard you've set for yourself, and by god have you made yourself one high standard. A standard of excellence and phenomenal stories. A standard of beautiful animation to carry out these stories. A standard that you have surely carried through with in this animation.

Bravo Pahgawk, and I expect to see you in the next round of NATA. If you don't then your opponent must be God on Earth.

Pahgawk responds:

Thanks :)
I see what you did there with that last sentence. Very nice!
...also I guess I just imagined that, in this strange reality I've made, the "world particle" is like a component of particles, sort of like how when we collide particles in real life, they're there before, but we're only just discovering them. Except I'm not actually sure how it works, and if the new particles we find are little parts that make up the other particles we know of, or if the act of smashing them apart creates the new ones, so I guess I shouldn't be talking until I do a bit more research. It all goes over my head anyway, though.

[Rage Face Invasion]

Overall, it was a great quotable animation, but it really dragged on, and the comedic timing was off. It had potential, it just needs work on timing, which nearly killed it for me, but didnt. Easy 4/5.

[Stick figure rights]

I THOUGHT THAT THE VOICE ACTING WAS FANTASTIC!

From both of us. Of course it aint perfect, so I'll judge fairly.

I thought that you did a good job emulating the voices in the animation. Not to mention an overall good combination.

[The MacQuarium]

Didnt quite get the joke there. But the animation was good...

[Elphie]

Dat happy ending :)

Animation wasn't anything to rant about, but was definitely no issue either. The story itself was nice with, as I said, a great little ending. Overall, a nice little animation.
4/5

neeko responds:

Thanks!

[Quest for Coffee pt. 1]

Hm.....I dunno. The story was clear. The guy was looking for coffee. Just seemed sort of short and low qualityish.

No complaints, but no real compliments either. I'll give it a 3

[Pilot]

Great little video. Loved the animation, and the style reminded me greatly of a certain Nickelodeon TV show (you know what it is).

Love it. 4.5/5

JaceC responds:

Thank you for reviewing! Glad you enjoyed it!

[A Trip to the Shop]

Ant had the better moustache at the end.

But anywho, I look forward to seeing this on the front page. Funny facial expressions and more than decent voice acting and animation. The script was patchy but good all in all.

Easy 4.5/5

TravelSizedLions responds:

Thanks (and yeah, I thought so too)! I'm certainly no writer, but I'm learning. :)